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Things I Hate About Womans...

   Posted by Basketcase676  Promoted 54 days 12 hours ago  1748 views

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Beelzebub, on 7/12/2008 6:31:41 PM
Total Posts: 941, Joined: 6/6/2006
Yeah too short (same as other one). I suggest you take your time writing and write over 2-3 days (NEVER rush a blog cause it comes out shit) and make them longer and more detailed. You got good style kid and you picked topics you can really go apeshit talking about but after a good topic choice you disappoint with only 2 - 3 relevant arguements. While you have some funny ideas and stories you need more than 2 - 3 to make a good blog. Most people write top 10 lists (which I hate) but that would be a useful guideline for you for the amount you should write as approximately 10 things is a good number. Keep writing you can write good stuff.
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Basketcase676, on 7/13/2008 3:18:49 AM
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Thanks for the tips :)
Will try better with them now, thanks agains!
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Romanov, on 7/13/2008 8:59:32 AM
Total Posts: 755, Joined: 3/28/2008
sometimes you only can find 3-4. usually i shoot for 5

http://www.shoutwire.com/comments/full/173902/Israel_Vs_Palestine_
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beezle had a good point with the 10 thing though it takes time to find 10 actual solid points:

http://www.shoutwire.com/comments/full/172899/Euthanasia_Good_or_B
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good, but too short of blog. go for at least 500 words. only go shorter if you have some major media or pictures etc. you should always proofread your work. usually i come up with a few good points to add when i proofread the day after i write because my mind thinks about different things and from different angles with everyday. ill proofread it for you if you want (pm me a message in the forums or get on irc)
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bulshoy, on 7/14/2008 7:12:25 AM
Total Posts: 6489, Joined: 11/15/2005
"I suggest you take your time writing and write over 2-3 days (NEVER rush a blog cause it comes out shit) and make them longer and more detailed."

If I can play devil's advocate here, I must note that my most popular editorials are the ones that are written on a whim, often in less than 20 minutes.

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jd8coke, on 7/14/2008 8:33:07 AM
Total Posts: 2316, Joined: 2/5/2006
Shouted, just for the bacon and cheese sandwich thing.
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Dock, on 7/14/2008 1:08:52 PM
Total Posts: 2319, Joined: 11/12/2005
It doesn't get any better than bacon, samiches and womans. Shouted.
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Kouenn, on 7/14/2008 2:17:16 PM
Total Posts: 79, Joined: 10/3/2007
"womans, you make us(me)like crap!"

We make you like crap eh? I think you do a pretty good job of making yourself like crap all by your big boy self.
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micmac988, on 7/14/2008 7:04:12 PM
Total Posts: 456, Joined: 1/16/2007
1. How can you complain about something then say "But its alright about 10 mins later cos she comes back and apologizes and makes me a cheese/bacon samwich :D"? That's a rather retarded statement in and of itself. If you hate something, there's no room for forgiveness.

2. Your choice of words make you sound like a 13 yr old pre '08 Zero. It was sort of funny the first time, but copy cats are unoriginal.

3. There's a lot more to hate about women than what you've got listed. And none of them are even hinted at.

Take the advice Beelz gave and take your time writing things. Make lists and outlines.

Shouted for possibilities and Bashed for getting my hopes up.
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Beelzebub, on 7/14/2008 7:36:03 PM
Total Posts: 977, Joined: 6/6/2006

@ Bulshoy

I agree the best things come out as a whim and the 20 minutes of spastic writing makes a great foundation for a blog. In my experience though if I leave it sit for a day or so after writing then I think up more stuff and reword it and just make it better. Each to his own style though I guess.
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SpiritualWarrior, on 7/14/2008 7:53:50 PM
Total Posts: 218, Joined: 7/9/2007
I'd hate to be a spelling Nazi...but for Christ's sake, man. Copy and paste what you wrote into Microsoft Word and use spelling/grammar check.

You points could have been brought up a little better, but I do get the just of what you're saying. You have a couple good points that I mostly agree with.

Shouted for the effort and the decent points, but bashed for being difficult to read due to the spelling and grammar.

@ Bulshoy: Completely agree, man. I never plan out my blogs. It's always on the spot when I feel the need to rant about something. I don't sit down at the computer, Microsoft Word open and create an outline and spent two or three days brainstorming topics or whatever. Something gets on my mind, I get it off my mind by writing a blog on it.
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